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English has numerous ways of associating separate events & situations with the same time
SIMULTANEITY IN ENGLISH
Saying that an action or state is simultaneous with another one, rather than earlier or later, is a common need in professional writing (see, for example, 210. Process Descriptions). Of course, some advice about it is usually provided by elementary language courses. However, like numerous other basic meanings, it can be expressed in English in many more ways than just those described at elementary level.
I wish here to explore this variety in detail. My aim is not just to unearth vocabulary and grammar that might be new to at least some readers, but also to provide ideas for more effective paraphrasing and more sophisticated general writing.
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TYPES OF SIMULTANEITY
It is possible for a simultaneity statement to mention more than two actions and/or states, but for simplicity mentions of only two will be considered here. These might be two actions, two states, or an action and a state. They might have equal duration, starting and ending together, or one longer than the other:
(a) (ACTION-ACTION) The war ended when the clock struck one.
(b) (STATE-STATE) Snow covers the ground. Many trees have no leaves.
(c) (STATE-ACTION) Snow lay on the ground. A lone wolf howled.
All of these can reverse their order. For more examples of state verbs, see 66. Types of Passive Verb Meaning.
There are two types of action: brief, like ended and struck in (a), and extended. Extension may be through repetition, e.g. BREATHE, HAMMER, TICK and TYPE, or just through taking a long time, e.g. BUILD and GROW. Most verb actions can alternate between brief and extended. For example, ends can be extended as well as brief, and howls can be multiple as well as single. Even the action of verbs like GROW, which most would consider extended, can become brief if compared to a long time period.
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WAYS OF SHOWING SIMULTANEITY
Simultaneity does not always need special language to be understood. It usually seems to be recognizable without it if at least one of two closely-linked verbs inherently represents a state or extended action. This is the case, for example, in sentences (b) and (c) above, which respectively have the clear state-describing verbs covers and lay. Simultaneity is understood regardless of whether or not the other verb in these sentences inherently describes a state, regardless of which verb is mentioned first, and regardless of the presence or absence of any special simultaneity language.
The need for simultaneity language arises when two closely-linked verbs either definitely or possibly represent two brief actions. This is because such verbs without this language represent a sequence rather than simultaneity. In sentence (a), both ended and struck definitely represent brief actions, and when is added to show their simultaneity. In the following, the absence of a context causes uncertainty about whether blew represents a brief or extended action, leading to uncertainty about simultaneity and hence a need for simultaneity language:
(d) The wind blew. The clock struck one.
Simultaneity language includes the following.
1. Continuous Verb Tenses
The BE -ing verb form typically indicates states and extended actions. This means it cannot show simultaneity of two brief actions like those in sentence (a). I would argue that it is also not the main simultaneity indicator with verbs that inherently represent a state or extended action, like covers in (b). This is because, as mentioned above, they already indicate simultaneity through their very meaning. They can often be put into a continuous tense – is covering in (b) – but this tense would just highlight or emphasise the simultaneity.
Note, though, that this use of continuous tenses is not always an option: have in (b), for example, could not become *are having because HAVE meaning “possess” is one of those verbs that rarely allows a continuous tense anywhere.
Where continuous tenses are useful for showing simultaneity is with verbs like HOWL and BLOW when absence of simultaneity language would leave their meaning unclear. Thus, replacing blew in (d) with was blowing would make it clear that the two sentences were expressing simultaneous rather than successive events.
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2. Conjunctions
In sentence (a), the added simultaneity-showing word when is a conjunction. It is hardly surprising that simultaneity indicators include conjunctions, given the association of both with verb pairs.
When can show simultaneity when positioned either before or between the two verbs that it links. In the latter case, it sometimes creates a double meaning (see 301. Structures with a Double Meaning 5, #6).
A problem with using when to mark two brief actions as simultaneous, as in (a), is that it can also mark them as a sequence where it means “after” (see 171. Aspects of the Past Perfect Tense):
(e) Prices typically rise when demand increases.
Fortunately, the context or logical reasoning usually ensures that the correct meaning of when is understood. Moreover, the “after” meaning can be made clearer by changing the tense of the verb after when to one with HAVE – has increased in (e) – and/or replacing when with after.
When can alternatively combine with an extended action or a state to show simultaneity:
(f) When Hannibal crossed the Alps, his elephants died.
Here, crossed is an extended action during which the brief one died occurs. When could also occupy the middle of the sentence, becoming associated with died (though probably with crossed changed to was crossing). In the following example, when shows simultaneity of an extended action and an equally long state. One could precede, or even replace, when with the whole time for emphasis:
(g) When Hannibal was crossing the Alps, he wanted to surprise Rome.
Other major simultaneity conjunctions are while and as. Their following verb always expresses a state or extended action. Either could replace when at the start of (f) and (g), though in (g) the meaning would change, giving the understanding that Hannibal’s desire to surprise Rome existed only during his Alps journey – not before or after. In other words, while and as events limit the time taken by the main action or event in their sentence (wanted above) to their own duration, whereas when events do not. While means “when and only when”.
As resembles while in not being usable with a brief action or one lasting longer than the action or state of the main sentence verb. However, its verb can only represent an extended action – not a state. Consider these:
(h) As vocabulary expands, conversation becomes easier.
(i) The young ones lay around their mother as she slept.
In both cases, the as action passes through time in parallel with the main action or state. There is also a suggestion of a close link – often causal – with it: conversation is facilitated by the expansion of vocabulary; the resting of the young ones is a response to the sleeping of their mother. I take slept to be more an action than a state because the latter is more clearly expressed with the adjective expression was asleep (see 66. Types of Passive Verb Meaning) – and was asleep requires while, not as.
For another use of when in this blog, see 271. Tricky Grammar Contrasts 3, #4. For other uses of as, see 53. “As”, “Like” and “Such As”, 92. Complement-Showing “As”, 104. Naming Data Sources with “As” and 183. Statements between Commas.
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3. Connectors/Adverbs
The meanings of simultaneity conjunctions are equally expressible with adverb-like expressions acting as connectors, which require the two verbs to be in separate sentences (the connector in the second) so that they have equal focus (see 40. Conjunctions versus Connectors). There are numerous simultaneity connectors, reflecting the variety of simultaneity types identified above. Most are phrasal (see 259. Multi-Word Connectors):
BRIEF-BRIEF: at the same time, at that moment, simultaneously
EXTENDED-EXTENDED: all along, all the while, at the same time, concurrently, during this time, in the meantime, meanwhile, simultaneously, then, the whole (of the) time, throughout (this time) (see 258. Saying How Long Something Lasts, #1 and #4).
Note how then indicates later time with brief events, and a simultaneous one otherwise (see 282. Features of History Writing, #8).
EXTENDED-BRIEF: during this time / period, at one (or some) point, in the process
BRIEF-EXTENDED: at that moment, at this time, then, this is (or was) while/during…
The following illustrate these latter two categories:
(j) (EXTENDED-BRIEF) The Great Depression lasted 10 years. At one point, US unemployment reached 25%.
(k) (BRIEF-EXTENDED) A sudden change occurred. At that moment, the liquid was boiling.
Neither of these, however, allows in the process, which needs both verbs to have the same subject:
(l) The Great Depression lasted about 10 years. In the process, it raised US unemployment to 25%.
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4. Prepositions
Prepositions, like conjunctions, accompany an event or situation that is not the focus of their sentence (see 37. Subordination). In addition, they need it expressed with a noun, not a verb:
(m) A sudden change occurred during the boil.
If the event or situation after a simultaneity preposition was the focus of the previous sentence, its repetition with the preposition is a kind of connector synonym.
Various prepositions can express simultaneity. Different ones are necessary according to whether they introduce a brief (B) or extended (E) event / situation, and also which of these possibilities the sentence’s verb expresses. The main options are:
B (verb = B): at the time of, alongside, along with
B (verb = E): with
E (verb = B): during, in
E (verb = E): during, in, alongside, throughout, with
A simultaneity-showing with phrase usually goes at the end of its sentence (see 88. Exotic Grammar Structures, #7), as in this paraphrase of sentence (j):
(n) The Great Depression lasted 10 years, with US unemployment peaking at 25%.
A with phrase expressing an extended simultaneous period here could be …with people suffering greatly.
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5. Verbs
English conjunction meanings can surprisingly often be expressed with a verb instead. Sometimes the verb is a conjunction synonym, with a subject and object corresponding to the partner verbs of the conjunction (see 131. Uses of “Action” Nouns, #1), e.g.:
(o) Hannibal’s passage across the Alps COINCIDED WITH the death of his elephants.
(p) The Great Depression SAW 25% unemployment to the USA.
Other verbs like this include ACCOMPANY, CO-OCCUR WITH, INVOLVE, PARALLEL and BE SIMULTANEOUS / CONCURRENT WITH.
The participle form of ordinary verbs (excepting brief-action ones) also expresses simultaneity:
(q) The disease spread widely, inflicting much suffering.
For a full overview, see 267. Participles and Gerunds with “Having”.
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6. Add-On Adjective Phrases
An alternative to the above participle use is an adjective + extra words, e.g. deadly to all in (q) (see 159. Exotic Grammar Structures 2, #3).