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Quite a lot of grammar mistakes are commonly made when similarities or differences are being named
NATURE AND VARIABILITY OF COMPARISON
To compare is to point out similarities and/or differences. It is an important part of academic and professional writing (see, for example, 94. Essay Instruction Words and 115. Describing Numerical Data). Reflecting this importance, the grammar and vocabulary of comparison are quite varied (see 149. Saying How Things are Similar and 216. Indicating Differences).
Unfortunately, the variety of ways to compare means that numerous kinds of language error can be made by writers who are not used to English. Some of these are considered elsewhere within this blog, but the aim of the present post is to survey in a more complete way all of the aspects of comparison-making that seem to cause errors of grammar and vocabulary.
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COMPARISON ERRORS ALSO CONSIDERED ELSEWHERE
The following errors in comparison-making are considered in depth elsewhere within this blog.
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1. “On the Contrary”
This phrase is typically a “connector”, occurring in the second of two closely-related sentences to help show a meaning link between them (see 18. Relations Between Sentences and 40. Conjunctions versus Connectors). The error is to think that the meaning link is that of “difference” or “contrast”. The connectors that need to be used instead for this meaning are in contrast, by contrast or on the other hand (see 216. Indicating Differences).
The correct use of on the contrary is after a negative statement to show that its extreme opposite is meant rather than something halfway between negative and positive. Consider this:
(a) Paris is not at all far from London. On the contrary, it can now be reached by train in a little over two hours
Here, on the contrary says that not…far means “verty near”. For further discussion, see 20. Problem Connectors, #1.
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2. “Like” and “Unlike”
These words are the central topic of 56. Comparing with “Like” and “Unlike”. They must introduce a similar or different idea that the reader is expected to know already and hence is not the main point of their sentence. The error that can occur is using them before a main idea. Consider this:
(b) Ants form colonies headed by a queen, like bees.
This is a sentence about ants, not ants and bees. If the message is supposed to be as much about bees as ants, then a more appropriate wording instead of like bees might be and so do bees or, more formally, Both ants and bees … at the start (see 149. Saying How Things are Similar).
The distinction between ideas that are expected to be familiar to a reader and those that are not is common in comparison sentences, and can involve other wording than that considered here. It is, indeed, widespread in English as a whole (see 156. Mentioning What the Reader Knows Already).
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3. “The One(s)” versus “That/Those”
This is one of the points in the post 63. Constraints on Using “the one(s)”. Quite often there is a free choice between the one(s) and that/those, but in formal comparison-writing it is normal to use only that/those, like this:
(c) Deaths from road accidents are now much higher than those from malaria.
Using that/those is often necessary to ensure that a comparison is logically correct (see “Comparing Like with Like” in 170. Logical Errors in Written English).
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4. “Aspects” versus “Respects”
These two words both mean a “part” of an abstract idea like “a question”, “pity” or “life” (see 196. Saying what is inside Things). The choice between them depends on whether or not the preposition in is in front: after in, you have to say respects not aspects; otherwise aspects is the only possibility (see 81. Tricky Word Contrasts 2, #4). Saying *in…aspects is a quite common error by speakers who are not so familiar with English.
The need for in (and hence the common error) is particularly frequent in comparison-making because this preposition is the main means of saying how two things resemble or differ from each other (see #3 in the next section). Here is a typical sentence where in is followed by respects:
(d) Medicine and Veterinary Science differ/are similar in various respects.
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One other aspect of comparison-making that is considered elsewhere within these pages is not an error but should be mentioned because it can cause confusion. This is more before an adjective + uncountable or plural noun. The problem is that more can be understood as going with either the adjective or the noun, so that sometimes misunderstandings are likely (see 182. Structures with a Double Meaning 2, #3).
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FURTHER ERRORS IN MAKING COMPARISONS
The following are further possible errors with comparisons.
5. “Than” without a Comparative
English sentences with than usually need a comparative word in them – one with -er, more, less etc. (though American English also allows the non-comparative word different). Some other languages, by contrast, show comparisons only with a word like than – they do not require a comparative form with it. Speakers of such languages can easily forget to put an English adverb or adjective before than into the comparative form, producing such errors as *clear than or *quickly than (see 298. Grammar Meanings without Grammar, #3).
Note that compared to cannot accompany comparative words: it needs an ordinary adjective or adverb (see 231. Confusions of Similar Structures 3, #5). It also differs slightly in meaning from than (see 221. Multi-Word Prepositions, #3).
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6. Incorrect Prepositions
Some words indicating a similarity or difference are followed by a typical preposition that can be hard to remember (for the concept of “typical” prepositions, see 111. Words with a Typical Preposition). The underlined words in the following sentences are of this kind. What should the preposition be in each blank space?
(e) Greek cuisine is similar … Lebanese.
(f) Zambia has almost the same climate … Zimbabwe.
(g) Ford’s new model looks virtually identical … the old one.
(h) Winter in Russia is very different … summer.
The correct prepositions are to, as (not strictly a preposition but used similarly), to and from (than in American English). These are nearly always the only possible choices, except that some contexts require the same to have that rather than as (see 87. “Same As” versus “Same That”). Using of or with after any of the words is hardly ever correct.
Note that similar to, identical to and equivalent to can all be followed by a verb as well as a noun. The verb needs -ing because the to is a preposition (see 35. Words Followed by “to -ing”). Note also that no preposition is possible after the verb RESEMBLE (see 42. Unnecessary Prepositions).
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7. Inappropriate Clarification of a Similarity or Difference
The simplest kind of comparison merely indicates the existence of a similarity or difference. This is the case, for example, in sentence (e) above. However, such sentences can generally be expanded so as to say what the similarity or difference is. One way of doing this is with in. Thus, a continuation of (e) might be …in its common ingredients.
Even if the expansion needs a verb, you should still use in in formal contexts (not because). You can either add -ing to the verb to make a gerund, e.g. in using (see 70. Gerunds), or add that after in, like this:
(h) Greek cuisine is similar to Lebanese in that it uses substantially the same ingredients.
This use of in that is a rare example of that rather than the fact that after a preposition (see 153. Conjunction Uses of “that”). It is perhaps an indication that the two words together are actually a single conjunction (see 230. Multi-Word Conjunctions, #1).
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8. Excessive Use of “Less” before Nouns
Less can help to express a comparison before not just an adjective or adverb (less effective; less freely) but also a noun (less money). In the first case it is grammatically an adverb (see 194. Adverbs that Say How Much), in the second an adjective-like “determiner”.
The problem with the determiner use is that less is not the only word available – there is also fewer. Traditionally, there was a rule that less should precede uncountable nouns like money, fewer countable ones (in the plural form). Thus it was clear which should be used in the following:
(i) Jazz has … popularity today than in the past.
Because popularity is an uncountable noun, less is the right choice. By contrast, if countable fan was to be used instead of popularity, we would have to say fewer fans.
Today, however, the above rule is weakening. Many younger English speakers are using less all the time, the following noun remaining singular if uncountable and plural otherwise: less fans in (i). Some readers of formal writing may also accept this change, but it is not guaranteed. Thus, where the reader’s attitude is unclear, writers are safer following the traditional rule.
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9. Omission of “the” with Superlative Adjectives and Adverbs
It is quite a common error to omit the before a superlative adjective or adverb. However, to say that superlatives always need the is not fully accurate: most need it, one kind can keep or drop it, one kind typically drops it, and one kind replaces it with a(n).
The last of these possibilities is illustrated by the common marketing phrase a best buy. For a full explanation, see 305. Wording next to Superlatives, #3. Such combinations are not to be confused with usage like the following:
(j) A most interesting question was raised.
There is no superlative usage at all here because most means “very”.
When the rare need for a(n) does not arise, one common superlative type that always needs the is adjectives before a noun. One cannot, for example, say *hardest questions or *hardest of questions without the (for the difference made by of, see 247. Exotic Grammar Structures 6, #3).
Superlative adjectives after their noun, separated by a link verb like BE, also require the, provided their partner noun idea is being compared with other noun ideas rather than with itself in a different time or place (see below).
A third situation where the must be present is before a superlative adverb describing a following adjective:
(k) The most immediately RECOGNISABLE change was in colour.
The is not compulsory with two superlative types. With adverbs describing a verb rather than adjective, it can be kept or dropped without changed meaning:
(l) Those who TRIED (the) hardest were rewarded.
With adjectives after a link verb like BE, the is typically dropped to show a comparison with the same thing in another situation, e.g.:
(m) The police are busiest in summer.
This means the police are busier in summer than at other times. At their could be added before the superlative to make it even clearer (see 311. Exotic Grammar Structures 9, #3). Adding the, by contrast, would make the comparison with other workers.
For more about superlatives, see 194. Adverbs that Say How Much and 305. Wording next to Superlatives. For more about the, see 235. Special Uses of “the”.