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Beware of combining two similar grammatical structures into a single incorrect one
THE ERROR OF STRUCTURE CONFUSION
Grammar errors are of different kinds (see 202. Some Strategies for Learning English, “Practice Strategies” #1). This post is about a kind where parts of two confusingly similar correct structures are placed together so as often to form what I have called an “impossible combination” (see 100. What is a Grammar Error?). This is quite a common cause of grammatical error, and there are various other Guinlist posts that deal with it (see 133. Confusions of Similar Structures 1).
The similar grammar structures that give rise to such “hybrid” errors need to be distinguished from similar grammar structures that usually do not (see 217. Tricky Grammar Contrasts 1). They should also be distinguished from words with confusingly similar meanings, which are copiously illustrated in Guinlist posts with the title Tricky Word Contrasts. For grammar errors not involving similar structures, see 10 Words with Unexpected Grammar 1, 142 Grammar Errors with Passive Verbs and 144. Words that are Often Heard Wrongly.
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EXAMPLES OF CONFUSION ERRORS
1. “-ing” before a Noun versus “the -ing of”
An -ing verb without BE in front can still go directly before a noun:
(a) Filling the tank takes 24 hours.
The word filling here is a “gerund”: a verb with -ing added in order to give it a noun role in its sentence (subject of the verb takes). The noun the tank is able to go directly after filling because filling is still a verb and hence still able to have a following noun acting as its object (see the end of 70. Gerunds).
It is also possible in (a) to say The filling of the tank…. This is an even more noun-like use of filling, since it links with the object-like noun the tank by means of the preposition of, just as action nouns do (see 31. Prepositions after Action Nouns 1). However, it is still a verb, not a noun (see 240. Nouns that End with “-ing”).
I think there is a slight meaning difference between filling the tank and the filling of the tank. The former is less likely to be about a particular instance of the tank being filled than the latter is. The latter might, for example, be referring to a single just-mentioned tank-filling event. In other words, the added before filling may have its common back-referring meaning (see 235. Special Uses of “the”). The of before the tank is simply a grammatical consequence of adding the before filling.
The grammatical impossibility that these alternatives sometimes produce is a starting the without the later of (*the filling the tank). The converse (filling of the tank) is not grammatically impossible, though. If it is different at all from the use starting with the, it perhaps presents the -ing action more as ongoing than as an instantaneous event (a meaning contrast common in English – see, for example, 232. Verbs with an Object + “-ing”, #3).
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2. Noun + Number versus “year” + Date
There is a general rule in English that a noun followed directly by a number (or numerical letter) cannot usually have the before it. It is normal, for example, to say page 2, day 5, step 3 or plan B (see 235. Special Uses of “the”, #3).
A notable exception to this rule, however, is a requirement to add the before the noun year when the next word is the number of the year, e.g. the year 1492 (though year before a different kind of number, e.g. the school level Year 3, lacks the).
The most likely error to be caused by this contrast is dropping the necessary the before year (*year 1492). Although the other logical possibility – adding the before a noun other than year (e.g. *the page 3) – is quite a common error, I suspect that that is usually caused by custom in another language. Dropping the before year is much more likely to be caused by the differing grammar of similar English nouns because these latter are so varied and hence so widely-occurring compared to year.
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3. “per” versus “for every”
Per is a preposition typically used before a noun naming a unit of something:
(b) The advertised price of petrol is per litre.
(c) The velocity of sound is roughly 0.33 km per second.
Per in such sentences usually means “for every”. The error that is sometimes made is to add every after per. In other words, the idea of “every” that is already present in per is somehow felt not to be and is hence added alongside per. Part of the reason might be that per looks and sounds a little like for.
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4. “etc.” versus “and so on”
These synonymous expressions indicate that list items mentioned just before them are not the complete list, and that addressees should be able to think of unmentioned items themselves. In other words, they mark the mentioned list items as examples (see 1. Simple Example-Giving).
The strange spelling of etc. (with “t” before “c”, and a final full stop) is because it is an abbreviation of two words borrowed from the ancient European language Latin (see 130. Formal Abbreviations). The two Latin words are et (= and) and cetera (= others). The full stop is a standard abbreviation signal.
Thus, both of the expressions in question have the idea of “and” at their start. It corresponds to the and that most written lists include before their final item. The confusion error that is sometimes made is writing and before etc., so that the idea of “and” is expressed twice.
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5. CONFUSE versus BE + “confused about”
The verb CONFUSE can express either an action or a state (see 261. Words with Complicated Grammar 3, #3). Its passive form BE CONFUSED acts similarly, with or without by. However, if confused is followed by about instead of by, it is no longer a verb but an adjective (See 245. Adjectives with a Participle Ending, #1), and as such always expresses a state, not an action.
The common resultant error is combining the verb CONFUSE with about. If CONFUSE is in the active voice when used in this way (*I confuse about…), about is what I have elsewhere called an “unnecessary” preposition (see 42. Unnecessary Prepositions).
If CONFUSE is passive, its use with about will cause confused to be understood as an adjective instead. Often, this will not be a problem, especially if CONFUSE is intended to express a state. The real problem is when confused is intended to express an action, so that replacing by with about would create a strange or unlikely meaning, like this:
(d) *Listeners were repeatedly confused about the speaker’s unfamiliar terminology.
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6. “Will you…?” versus “May I…?”
These question-form sentence beginnings are the kind that do more than just make a question (see 274. Questions with a Hidden Meaning): they both indicate a request. Requests after Will you…? are for the addressee to do something. This is clear from the fact that the subject of will is you, the addressee. Requests after May I…?, by contrast, are for somebody other than the addressee (in this case I, the requesting person) to do something. In other words, They are requests for permission.
Although these request types are fundamentally differentiated by the kind of subject they have, the verbs before these subjects are obviously a clue too: will for assistance requests, may for permission ones. These verbs cannot show both types of request. Placing may before you instead of I, for example, indicates not a request but a blessing (see 237. Auxiliary Verbs in Professional Communication, #10).
The confusion error that sometimes arises here is putting may with the wrong subject (*May you…?). Although, as indicated, this combination is not an impossibility in English, it is an error if used in a request for assistance. The error may be a result of more than just the similarity of assistance and permission requests. A further factor could be the ability of both kinds of request to be made with can instead of will/may (Can I…? Can you…?). It is not inconceivable that someone aware of this possibility might forget which verb it involves, and use may in both cases instead.
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7. “is …-shaped” versus “has a … shape”
The shape of something unfamiliar is often indicated by reference to a similarly-shaped familiar object. Occasionally, the name of this object can be made into an adjective capable of describing the unfamiliar entity in an adjective way. For example, the noun cone can be made into the adjective conical. Often, however, there is no corresponding adjective, and instead the noun has to be combined with either -shaped (e.g. egg-shaped) or a(n) … shape (e.g. an egg shape).
Other common shape nouns like egg include bean, crescent, cross, kidney, pear, star and wedge.
The combination of a noun like egg with -shaped is adjective-like, while that with a(n) … shape is noun-like. This difference means that the former needs the verb BE to indicate the shape of something (… is egg-shaped), while the latter needs HAVE (has an egg shape) (see 163. Ways of Naming Properties). Occasionally, these possibilities are confused, a typical resultant incorrect combination being *is an egg shape or *is an egg in shape. These actually break no grammar rule: they are perhaps best described as logical errors with a grammatical cause (see 170. Logical Errors in Written English, #2).